Script polish for retention

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Edit this script to improve retention: [script]. Remove filler, front-load curiosity, add 2 pattern breaks (sound/visual), and shorten intros to under 8 seconds.

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• Cut hedging and long preambles.
• Add a change every ~15-20 seconds.
• Tease payoff early; deliver mid-late.

• B-roll plan
• Challenge format builder
• Cold open script
• Collab brief